My double page is probably the page that has changed the most. There were quite a lot of spelling mistakes in the text, however these were easy to change. Another problem which I had to consider was the fact that Kirsty had been obviously 'cut out' from the background. I softened the edges of the outline of Sasha and re-edited the image so they were less pixelated or Photoshopped. The font of the headings and interview were also changed to make them look more professional and also because after printing the page, the formatting for the text had disappeared as the font was missing. The main problem that was mentioned in my target audience was that the background was too white. To solve this I added a gradient which looked much better as it helped soften and break up the white and also enabled you to be able to see the starry background behind the copy.
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