Feed back for my complete magazine

The feed back that I received from my target audience was very helpful. I asked 18 people between the age range of 13 and 46. I found that the feed back from the older generation picked up more on the more technical side of the magazine and the younger more on the actual features and layout. The feed back sheets that I received have been scanned and are shown below. The average mark out of 10 for the magazine as a whole was 8 which I think is quite good, and reflects the fact that it does appeal to my target audience and there are only a few changes that need to made. As to whether or not my magazine was realistic, most of the people asked said that it was, however a couple of them said that it was in places and not in others.