There were quite a few changes that I made to my contents page after my feedback. Firstly I expanded on some of the descriptions to the articles as they were a bit too brief. The 'On the Cover' section also featured the same quotes as I had used on the front cover, which meant the reader wasn't getting much of a taster for what the article includes. I changed these quotes so that they were longer, offering more detail. The box containing information about James Claridge also had a spelling mistake in so I corrected this. Another problem which I had to consider was the fact that James had been obviously 'cut out' from the background. I softened the edges of the outline of James and added flashes in the background which also act as camera flashes, fitting in with the theme. The font of the headings were also changed to make them look more professional and also because after printing the page, the formatting for the text had disappeared as the font was missing.
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